2024年度第2回英検準1級ライティング（英文要約）

投稿日：2025/1/29

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2024年度第2回準1級問題文 (pg12)

模範解答は下記でした。

2024年度第2回準1級解答

Some people want US government funds to be allocated to the private sector to use for space exploration. Advocates say providing companies with such financial resources could eventually translate into new, high-quality products for everyone. Moreover, commercial interests in space could accelerate scientific progress through increased collaboration. That said, critics argue that current regulations may be insufficient to prevent corporate entities from threatening freedom of exploration in space.

分解してみて行きましょうか。

3段落ですが、4文ですね。

分けるとこうですね。

第一段落

Some people want US government funds to be allocated to the private sector to use for space exploration.

第二段落

Advocates say providing companies with such financial resources could eventually translate into new, high-quality products for everyone. Moreover, commercial interests in space could accelerate scientific progress through increased collaboration.

第三段落

That said, critics argue that current regulations may be insufficient to prevent corporate entities from threatening freedom of exploration in space.

まず、やることは本文から該当文を抜くことです。（文中の不要な箇所は端折ります）

第一段落

Government agencies in the United States have long used public funds to explore space.

Some people,

want the government to provide such companies with money.

第二段落

With government funds, private companies can create new technology to explore space.

This technology could then be used in other useful ways.

Government agencies are often slow

this could change if private companies were also given money to explore space.

More scientists would be working together.

第三段落

critics are concerned.

laws were created to make sure space and other planets stayed open

it is unclear if private companies must follow them

これらをつなげていきます。

Government agencies in the United States have long used public funds to explore space. Some people want the government to provide such companies with money. With government funds, private companies can create new technology to explore space. This technology could then be used in other useful ways. Government agencies are often slow but this could change if private companies were also given money to explore space. More scientists would be working together. However critics are concerned. The laws were created to make sure space and other planets stayed open but it is unclear if private companies must follow them.

これで99語です。語数の目安は60語～70語なので、ちょっと長いですね。

削ります。

The US government has used funds to explore space. Some want the government to provide companies with money. With funds, they can create new technology. This could then be used in other ways. Governments are often slow but this could change if they were also given money. Scientists would be working together. However, critics are concerned. The laws were created to make sure space stayed open but it is unclear if companies follow them.

74語。ぎりぎり受け入れられる超過でしょうか。

言い換えます。

Funds have been used by the US government for space exploration. Some people want the government to finance businesses. They can develop new technology if they have money. There are additional uses for this. Governments are frequently slow, but this might change if funding were also provided. There would be collaboration among scientists. Critics are worried. It's unclear if businesses obey the laws, which were made to ensure that space remains open.