2024年度第3回英検準1級ライティング（英文要約）

投稿日：2025/5/24

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2024年度第3回準1級問題文 (pg12)

模範解答は下記でした。

2024年度第3回準1級解答

A new technique called SRM could help tackle global warming by redirecting sunlight. Supporters think the technique could have a favorable economic impact on some countries with warmer climates. Yet there are concerns that dispersing chemicals may have some negative environmental side effects. Moreover, critics contend that SRM fails to deal with all of the various effects of CO2 emissions, which are a root cause of global warming.

分解して見ていきましょうか。

3段落ですが、4文ですね。

分けるとこうですね。

第一段落

A new technique called SRM could help tackle global warming by redirecting sunlight.

第二段落

Supporters think the technique could have a favorable economic impact on some countries with warmer climates.

第三段落

Yet there are concerns that dispersing chemicals may have some negative environmental side effects.

Moreover, critics contend that SRM fails to deal with all of the various effects of CO2 emissions, which are a root cause of global warming.

まず、やることは本文から該当文を抜くことです。（文中の不要な箇所は端折ります）

第一段落

solar radiation modification (SRM),

works by reflecting sunlight away from Earth.

第二段落

Supporters believe the technique could be positive.

hot temperatures can harm the economic growth

SRM could reduce temperatures quickly. This would provide necessary help to affected industries.

第三段落

Despite this, there are some issues around SRM.

spraying chemicals into the atmosphere.

it only lowers temperatures

CO2 emissions from these fuels also negatively affect the environment

SRM cannot solve such problems.

これらをつなげていきます。

Solar radiation modification (SRM) works by reflecting sunlight away from Earth. Supporters believe the technique could be positive. Hot temperatures can harm the economic growth. SRM could reduce temperatures quickly. This would provide necessary help to affected industries. Despite this, there are some issues around SRM such as spraying chemicals into the atmosphere and lowering only temperatures. Also CO2 emissions from the fuels negatively affect the environment. SRM cannot solve such problems.

これで72語です。語数の目安は60語～70語なので、これでも良いですが、60以上70以下におさめたいですね。

削ります。

Solar radiation modification (SRM) works by reflecting sunlight away from Earth. Supporters believe the technique could be positive. Hot temperatures can harm the economic growth. SRM could reduce temperatures quickly. This would provide necessary help to affected industries. Despite this, there are some issues such as spraying chemicals into the atmosphere and lowering only temperatures. Also CO2 emissions from the fuels negatively affect the environment. SRM cannot solve such problems.

70語！

言い換えます。

Solar radiation modification (SRM) diverts sunbeam away from our planet. Advocates believe this could have a positive impact. High temperatures can negatively affect the economic development. By reducing temperatures, this would provide support to the industries affected. However there are some issues such as discharging chemicals into the air and it can only decrease temperatures. Also SRM does not have a solution for the carbon-dioxide emissions from the fuels.