2024年度 第3回 英検 1級 ライティング（英文要約）
投稿日：2025/12/13
1級 ライティング（英文要約）を見て行きましょう。
模範解答は下記でした。
第2回の記事はこちらです。
The Internet has brought about a sizeable expansion of the worldwide unlawful trade in wild animal parts. This is problematic, as the resulting exploitation of wild animals is depleting their numbers, which jeopardizes the livelihoods of the local people who rely on wildlife tourism. In order to combat this illegal trade, governments have established areas with special measures in place to safeguard the animals that live within their bounds from illicit activity. Despite these initiatives, some wild animals are still in peril of being seized or killed, as they must frequently transit between protected areas.
分解してみて行きましょうか。
3段落ですが、4文ですね。
分けるとこうですね。
第一段落
The Internet has brought about a sizeable expansion of the worldwide unlawful trade in wild animal parts.
第二段落
This is problematic, as the resulting exploitation of wild animals is depleting their numbers, which jeopardizes the livelihoods of the local people who rely on wildlife tourism.
第三段落
In order to combat this illegal trade, governments have established areas with special measures in place to safeguard the animals that live within their bounds from illicit activity. Despite these initiatives, some wild animals are still in peril of being seized or killed, as they must frequently transit between protected areas.
まず、やることは本文から上記に相当する該当文を抜くことです。（文中の不要な箇所は端折ります）
第一段落
animal parts that are sold for high prices in the illegal wildlife market.
Internet has provided easy access to many more customers.
第二段落
illegal wildlife trade can, of course, reduce wild animal populations
a serious adverse effect on such communities, as they have few other ways to make money.
第三段落
set up areas that are carefully managed to prevent the unauthorized removal of wild animals.
Yet the protected areas are often separated from each other by long stretches of unprotected land.
As a result, when the animals do this, they are again vulnerable to being captured or killed.
これらをつなげていきます。
Animal parts are sold for high prices in the illegal wildlife market. Internet has provided easy access to many more customers.
Illegal wildlife trade can reduce wild animal populations. There is a serious adverse effect on communities in remote areas, as they have few other ways to make money.
One strategy is setting up areas that are carefully managed to prevent the unauthorized removal of wild animals. Yet the protected areas are often separated from each other by long stretches of unprotected land. As a result, when the animals do this, they are again vulnerable to being captured or killed.
これで100語です。語数の目安は90語～110語なので、ぴったりですね。（2025年度より語数は目安でなく指定となっています。24年度第3回までは90語～110語目安でOKでした。）
言い回しを変えます。
Parts of animals are traded at expensive prices in the unlawful wildlife market. Internet has enabled easy access to a vast amount of buyers.
Illegal wildlife trade can make wild animal populations decline. There is a serious negative effect on societies in rural regions, since they have few other ways to earn.
One of the solutions is to restrict areas that are managed to block the moving of the animals. However these areas are often far apart from each other with unprotected land in between. As a result, when they relocate, they are again at a risk of being seized or hunted.
どうでしょう。まず本文から該当文を抜き出すことが先決です。
それをつなげるだけで合格点はもらえると思います。
慣れていなければ、抜き出してつなげることに集中してください。
言い回しを変えることは、次のステップで良いです。
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