2024年度 第1回 英検 準1級 ライティング（英文要約）
投稿日：2024/8/3
準1級 ライティング（英文要約）を見て行きましょう。
模範解答は下記でした。
Some people are working to make sure that free school lunches remain available to all students. Program supporters believe that ensuring all students have lunch can help boost their academic performance. Moreover, providing free school lunches allows parents with limited time to focus on other responsibilities. However, critics argue that the food discarded from unfinished meals creates a significant quantity of waste.
分解してみて行きましょうか。
3段落ですが、4文ですね。
分けるとこうですね。
第一段落
Some people are working to make sure that free school lunches remain available to all students.
第二段落
Program supporters believe that ensuring all students have lunch can help boost their academic performance.
Moreover, providing free school lunches allows parents with limited time to focus on other responsibilities.
第三段落
However, critics argue that the food discarded from unfinished meals creates a significant quantity of waste.
まず、やることは本文から該当文を抜くことです。（文中の不要な箇所は端折ります）
第一段落
Schools have often supplied free lunch.
Many want them to continue.
第二段落
providing a healthy meal for all students is important. Doing this can improve their concentration levels, leading to better test scores.
parents of all students will be able to spend more time on work and other child-raising issues.
第三段落
a large amount is left over. The schools have no option but to throw it away.
これらをつなげていきます。
Schools have often supplied free lunch.
Many want them to continue.
Providing a healthy meal for all students is important.
Doing this can improve their concentration levels, leading to better test scores.
Parents of all students will be able to spend more time on work and other child-raising issues.
A large amount is left over. The schools have no option but to throw it away.
これで66語です。語数の目安は60語～70語なので、ぴたりとはまりました。
これから、言い回しや重要な追加や接続詞などを少し変えます。（便宜上、変えたところは赤字にします）
Schools supply free lunch to all students.
Many want the program to continue.
Providing a healthy school meal for all students is important.
Doing this can improve their academic levels.
Parents of the students will be able to spend more time on work and children.
However large amount of food can be left over. The schools must throw it away.
これで60語になりました。
もっとがらっと変えても良いと思いますが、本文から該当文を抜き出し、それをつなげるだけで合格点はもらえると思います。
どれを抜き出して良いか分からないという意見があると思います。
該当箇所を見てください。
Therefore
This is because
Consequently
これらのキーワードで始まっている文を抜いています。
上記のように結果や理由を述べる箇所は要注意ということです。
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