2024年度 第1回 英検 1級 ライティング（英文要約）
投稿日：2024/8/11
1級 ライティング（英文要約）を見て行きましょう。
模範解答は下記でした。
Urban populations worldwide continue to expand as people migrate from rural areas in search of better opportunities for wealth and social mobility. As a result, cities are becoming increasingly overcrowded, which means insufficient land is available for residential and infrastructure development. In response to this problem, some cities are employing land reclamation as a way to increase the amount of land that can be used for construction. Unfortunately, the disadvantage of land reclamation is that it is less sturdy than natural land, so costly preventative work is required to protect the buildings constructed on it.
分解してみて行きましょうか。
3段落ですが、4文ですね。
分けるとこうですね。
第一段落
Urban populations worldwide continue to expand as people migrate from rural areas in search of better opportunities for wealth and social mobility.
第二段落
As a result, cities are becoming increasingly overcrowded, which means insufficient land is available for residential and infrastructure development.
第三段落
In response to this problem, some cities are employing land reclamation as a way to increase the amount of land that can be used for construction.
Unfortunately, the disadvantage of land reclamation is that it is less sturdy than natural land, so costly preventative work is required to protect the buildings constructed on it.
まず、やることは本文から該当文を抜くことです。（文中の不要な箇所は端折ります）
第一段落
the world’s population lived in urban areas.
that proportion had risen, and it continues to grow.
is the movement of people from rural areas to cities.
people seeking educational opportunities, jobs, and the chance to improve their lives.
第二段落
Increased population density puts a strain on transportation systems and utility supply networks,
Rising populations also create a shortage of housing and public facilities
第三段落
They have turned to a process known as land reclamation.
This has provided additional space to build on
it is less solid than naturally formed land
developers must take expensive steps to stabilize the land and prevent damage to the structures
これらをつなげていきます。
The proportion of the world’s population lived in urban areas had risen, and it continues to grow. It is because of the movement of people from rural areas to cities. They are seeking educational opportunities, jobs, and the chance to improve their lives.
Increased population density puts a strain on transportation systems and utility supply networks, it also creates a shortage of housing and public facilities.
Some cities have turned to a process known as land reclamation. This has provided additional space to build on. However it is less solid than naturally formed land so developers must take expensive steps to stabilize the land and prevent damage to the structures.
これで110語です。語数の目安は90語～110語なので、ちょうどですね。
ですが、言い回しを変えます。
The percentage of people living in urban areas worldwide has increased and is still rising. The reason for this is the migration of people from rural to urban areas. They are looking for employment, educational opportunities, and the ability to better their lives.
In addition to placing stress on utility supply networks and transportation systems, increased population density also results in a shortage of housing and public amenities.
A technique called land reclamation has been used by some cities. This has given us more room to expand. Nevertheless, because it is not as solid as naturally formed land, developers must invest heavily in stabilizing the area to avoid causing harm to the buildings.
113語と少々でましたが、良しとします。200語超の大作を書いてしまってはダメですが、90語～110語はsuggestionです。少々すくなくとも、少々おおくとも大丈夫です。
どうでしょう。まず本文から該当文を抜き出すことが先決です。
それをつなげるだけで合格点はもらえると思います。
慣れていなければ、抜き出してつなげることに集中してください。
言い回しを変えることは、次のステップで良いです。
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