2025年度 第1回 英検 準1級 ライティング(英文要約)
投稿日:2025/10/7
準1級 ライティング(英文要約)を見ていきましょう。
模範解答は下記でした。
District heating systems, in which multiple buildings share an energy source, are becoming more common globally. Supporters claim that because district heating is more energy-efficient, it helps diminish global warming. Furthermore, district heating systems undergo routine maintenance, resulting in less likelihood of failure. On the other hand, critics argue that installing district heating systems in areas with pre-existing buildings makes the process costly.
分解して見ていきましょうか。
3段落ですが、4文ですね。
分けるとこうですね。
第一段落
District heating systems, in which multiple buildings share an energy source, are becoming more common globally.
第二段落
Supporters claim that because district heating is more energy-efficient, it helps diminish global warming.
Furthermore, district heating systems undergo routine maintenance, resulting in less likelihood of failure.
第三段落
On the other hand, critics argue that installing district heating systems in areas with pre-existing buildings makes the process costly.
まず、やることは本文から該当文を抜くことです。(文中の不要な箇所は端折ります)
第一段落
However, there are more and more communities using what is known as “district heating.”
The special feature of this system is that a central energy source is connected to buildings
第二段落
When many buildings share the same heat source, less heat is needed than when heating buildings separately.
This reduces global warming effects.
district heating systems are regularly checked and kept in good condition.
第三段落
Creating new district heating systems involves placing lots of underground pipes,
construction in such places needs a large amount of money.
これらをつなげていきます。
There are more and more communities using what is known as “district heating.” The special feature of this system is that a central energy source is connected to buildings. When many buildings share the same heat source, less heat is needed than when heating buildings separately. This reduces global warming effects. Additionally, district heating systems are regularly checked and kept in good condition. However creating new district heating systems involves placing lots of underground pipes. So the construction in some places needs a large amount of money.
これで87語です。語数は60語~70語なので、削ります。
There are more communities using what is called “district heating.” The special feature of this system is that a central energy source is connected to buildings. When many buildings share the same heat source, less heat is needed than when heating separately. This reduces global warming effects. Additionally, the systems are regularly checked and maintained. However creating them involves placing lots of underground pipes. So the construction in some places costs.
71語!
言い換えます。(そして、60以上、70以下にします)
Many cities are using systems called “district heating.” For the systems, the central energy source links buildings. Sharing the same central heat source, less is necessary than heating separately. This makes an impact on global warming. Additionally, the systems are checked and maintained routinely. However creating them demands installing many underground pipes. So the construction in some places costs a lot of money.
63語になりました。
本文から該当文を抜き出し、それをつなげるだけで合格点はもらえると思います。
どれを抜き出して良いか分からないという意見があると思います。
該当箇所を見てください。
逆説、追記、などは必ず入れています。
However, Despite this, In addition 以下はキーワードです。入れてください。
また、supporters(賛同者)以下、critics(批判者)以下も必ず入っています。
対して、For exampleやSuch asなどの例は入れていません。
キーワードで始まっている文を見つけてください。
上記のように結果や理由を述べる箇所は要注意ということです。
あとは、「で、第一段落は一言で言うたら何やねん」と自分に問いかけてください。
出て来た答えが、その段落の要約になります。
2級と違うところは、少々つなぎ合わせないといけないところですね。
2級は、抜き出す箇所がほぼ決まっています。
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